Saturday, July 27, 2013

Lost in My Thoughts


My eyes are wet and
I didn't knew.
My heart is crushing and 
No one knew.
Its all happening within me
And
I am the only one 
Who is the witness!
No one knows,
What goes through
My Mind
And I am here
With a Silent Smile :)



28 comments:

  1. lovely one.. with a deep thought.. :)

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  2. hmm... your words... though they seem to be simple.. they have a got a very deep meaning... :) nice...

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    1. heyy surya... its really nice to see you back here... thank you dear :)

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    2. .. :) kind of busy with college these days.. they are putting in more works.. ! I'll be coming in now and then.. :) keep writing.. tc..

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    3. okk :) so keep in touch and do write more :) tc keep smiling :)

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  3. Feelings that take place withing my self and i came to know :)

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    1. true! welcome to my blog... do visit again :)

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  4. The pain inside expressed nicely..hope its nothing personal of your..
    take care
    keep smiling always!!

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    1. heyy Alci... no its not @ ol personal :) just went on scribbling like that... keep visiting and yaa thanks for ur comment :)

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  5. You know sometimes silence is the best companion..He won't betray,He won't make you cry..He will just stand beside you..
    The lines have deep sorrow embedded in them and probably i am reading beyond the lines..
    Anyway smile and happy living
    have a nice day
    Sid :)

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    1. true! thankz a lot sid... keep visitng nd do leave ur comments :)

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    1. thank you so much... am glad u like my blog :)

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  7. Very touching, silence is a good first response to sorrow and hurt but venting it out in some form heals the heart.

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    1. thankz a lot reshma :) n d words yea datz true!

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  8. mmmmm not very convincing smile yaar

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    1. may be yes, may be not... thank you deeps :)

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  9. soulful lines...the poet is the lone speaker,listener,witness..all by oneself...beauty of silence cannot be described..

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    1. true! nice to see you around after a long time :) thank you rohit!

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  10. Touching lines, Anjali...:) You can write some beautiful lines with a sense of simplicity...:)

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    1. thankz a lot prashanth... you r always generous in ur comments :)

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