Friday, March 14, 2014

Girl with a Smile!!

She slept that night...
by wetting her pillow...
She woke up to a brand new day..
adjusted her mascara,
faced the world with a brand new smile...
Without letting them know,
She is weeping inside...



17 comments:

  1. This is a very sweet poem...i am personally a very emotional person. Someone else may call this cheesy, but cheesy things are good. Aren't they

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    1. Thank You Ritesh!! Yea cheesy things are some times sweet!!! :) Welcome to my blog and keep visiting!!

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  2. Facing the world with a new smile is such a nice thought Anjali, I hope she is able to let out the pain in her heart soon and fill it with joy :)

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    1. Yea true Reshma!!! Thankz a lot dear! :)

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  3. yes.. sometimes we do need to wear that mask. and that smile brings us the new hope to face the world. very nicely portrayed the essence of it.. as usual its very sweet... :)

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    1. Thankz a lot meera!!! you are always kind when it comes to commenting!!! am really glad that you love it!!

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  4. I guess not oly she almost everyone else is an expert at that...the world is a stage right?

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    1. yea true!!! now every one is practicing this!! :)

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  5. Loved it yaar...:) Even though you said less through words, but the hidden meaning is worth making note for all of us..:) To say it with less words is an art in itself and you said it beautifully...:)

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    1. Thankz a lot Prashanth!!! am really honoured!! Can't stop smiling :) Thankz a lot!!

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  6. Aaah...it happens a lot, I guess night is the time when you can face your tears, other times you have pull up your socks and face the world!! Sweet poem sweetz....

    Loads Of Love
    Ruhie

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    1. thankz a lot swtz :D Itz really nice to see you back here!!

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    1. Hey... thanks yaa am glad to see you after a loooong time :) keep visiting!

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  8. it happend alot :) good one dear

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