Friday, April 18, 2014

A Tale of Hide & Seek!!


Frightened, 
She hide in a corner.
His eyes,
were searching for her!
"Silence", she said to her bangles!
Hands in her shoulder,
made her alert!
It was him,
with a devilish smile!
She beat him,
and bite his hands.
He screech with pain!
"WHAT HAPPENED?",
a voice asked.
She cried!
"Bhaiyya beating me Maa", 
And with a winning smile,
she pinched his cheeks!!! 


18 comments:

  1. lol that was an interesting twist.. i thought it was about that hiding pet cat :P

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    1. Thank You Meera :) thank God I was doubtful about placing that picture there!! It worked Yipeee!!! :)

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  2. Ha ha, sibling fights are so cute :)

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    1. That's true Reshma! Thanks for dropping by! :)

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  3. that was cute.. loved it..:) and pic worked!

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  4. Ohh..soo sweet and I was anxious about the girl at first...but poor bhaiyya!!! He was wounded thrice!! :D well written.This made me remember those fights I had between my sisters.Awesome picture selection too. Keep blogging..

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    1. thank you yaar... am glad that you like it!! and yaa these sibbling fights are always nostalgic!

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  5. Aww... this is something so innocent... <3

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    1. thank you soo much dear.. Its really nice to see you back!! :)

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  6. Nice pic and at last the girl won...;P

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    1. thank you and yeah the girl won :P ;)

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  7. twist... cute one... keep goin :)

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